Very cute i honstely think its good! congrats on the nice poem look at mine there under amby! thanks

Thank u for the comment i really enjoyes this poem it was exllcent u have a nack for this stuff i really like it should right some more did u c my when i c u one? its good i think well thanks agina

Hey angie! I think that this poem was alright. I think that the heart part kind of a little made it sound cheesy. But, this is just my opinion. It's basically the whole way through awsome!