Comments : Too Much Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by PersiaN TeardropZ

    Aww that soo sweeet. i know just how u feel. hmm...same thing happened to me, thank fully mah best frend called me just then caz he was bored n thn i told him everything. it reeli helps. if this is how u feel, then talk 2 sum1. k
    nice poem. its reeli nice
    take care hun
    xoxo
    ps. chek out sumfing of myn 2 thnx=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nice ending.. and a really intense start to this poem. The flow was really good. At one point I gave a sigh of relief, but then it turned dark again. Really cool stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Woah!

    Nice Poem.. You're Improving Soo Much.

    Just listen to your dad aswell.. And You'll Go Far My Friend!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Like Darien, I too gave a sigh of relief before realising that it all darkened up again... Good write! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    *tear* I remember these days too...
    Ainz