I thought this was rather good, rather god indeed. i loved the story, and i felt that you said everything in this short poem. i liked the constant questioning. also, the title is obviously very fiiting, which is another thing i liked. keep writing, as i'm sure you will, and i'll look foward to your next piece.

Brad

Well this is really an amazing poem, so deep and so touchy, i feel for u dear.

hope everything gets better for u with coming days

all the best and take care

I love reading your poems even though some make me cry...but if they make readers cry its the sign of a great poet...keep it up :) you have a great talent...

Wow! its so touching....it made me cry lol! nice job......5/5

Omg that was so sad. I'm so sorry about your mom. Remember your mom is still watching over you and she always will be.

Wow,this is so powerful. And very sad. Im sorry about your mum doll. This poem is touching as she is watching over you. Your work is fantastic

Awww...great poem... is your mom really here today? if not... sorry for your loss .. (((((big hugs)))))... email me at Luvs2Write16@aol.com, anytime, if you need anyone to talk to.. or instant message me at this address or michelle_leatherbury@yahoo--instant message me...but i only received email on the aol account... if you ever need anyone..just holla.

((((Big hugs..))))

keep it up...great work..5/5! made me cry.

michelle

Awesome job! I really enjoyed your poem.Did that really happen ?Just courious? Keep writing!!!!
Tisha~

Wow that was really good & deep. i know thats how i felt when i lost my brother. keep writing girl! its good!

tasha

This is a very inspiring and wonderful poem! I loved it...full of emotion and really powerful...I've had similar experiences about my cousin Ally. I enjoyed this write, keep it up! 5/5

Thanks for your comment on my poem, I greatly appreciate it!

Another great poem keep it up

Amazing job no doubt!
very heartfelt.....5/5

U noe whether it's true or not, whether it is or not, ur mom will always be on ur mind...missing sum1 u luv is tough, i noe the feeling...be strong girl...she's watching over u...

Great poem.... 5/5

Wow, amazing poem. I could feel the pain in your words. It was very emotional. I hope all is well. Thank you for your comment on my poem! Keep it up! 5/5