To you Christina *Part II*

by The Poetic Child   Mar 24, 2006


Christina......
You were just so amazing
Every time you walk
I see your eyes blazing

You were my shinning star
You were my Love
The One thing God gave me
From his very own hands above

But i cant see that no more
Because you left me on this strand
You pushed me off this cliff
and left no helping hand

We were together for 9 months
and you broke it, with such an ease
And I'm the one bleeding right now
While you enjoy your single breeze

No One comes Close to you
No one can even compare
They wouldn't even try it
They wouldn't even dare

on my scale of 1-10
you knocked a perfect 20
every other girl is at 5
you were just so plenty

To this day i Cherise what we had
The days on that special night
But what can i day now
When the one i love...
Wont kiss me goodnight

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  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    I dont understand how some poeple can write so beautifully yet with so much feeling. i am estounded and really feeling the feelings in that poem. i hope u get over christina soon but i no its hard. i hope it gets better cuz i dont think anyone should be put throught that kinda think espcialy after a longish relationship. well i think ur a great guy and an even greater poet. good luck and take care. and i am not a pimpet and not trying to be one either....well not much anyway.lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another great poem. just as sad as part 1 but with great emotion
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  • 18 years ago

    by mely

    Awesome poem

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O0o!! Saddness again!!!!! aww I hope everything will be okay for ya david! You are an amazing poet! if ya need a helping ear I'm right here...haha oops little poem lol

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