One last moment.

I loved it epsically the start it got weaker towards the end but it was sweet well done xx ALLY xx

The ending just seemed out of place. The first two stannzas were really good and then it seemed more like a suicide thing and whatever did stand out seemed ot be washed away and fall into the same cliche. I think you should fix up the spelling erros, which are few, and try and think outside of what others are writing about. It is a good poem and the first two stanzas really stood out from other poems.