Good poem hunny! i'm sorry things worked out that way. breaking up really sucks. Keep up the good work! love lots,
Ashley

Hun I know how you feel. This poem was so great. Keep it up!

Heyyy i really know how u feel, i felt the same way wen my gf left me, i mean i told u b4 right, well yea ur very right, tell her to look in ur eyes and say she dont love u any more, cos i knw that she loves u.
keep up the good work

OMG!! I LOVED THIS!! IT WAS SHORT AND SWEET!! but omfg! that's my feelings exactly right now.. :( WOW..

Holy...frijoles. You really know how people feel. I feel similar in this way and I love how you can capture truth and sincerity and love in this.

Such a sad and beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.