Autumn's Song *Kyrielle Sonnet

by Kim   Mar 24, 2006


Drift across the grains of Time
To the sway of a crystal chime
With the silver notes of the night
Dance beneath the Autumn twilight

Between the orange and red hues
That the dusk will quietly use
Take a breath of peaceful respite
Dance beneath the Autumn twilight

Hear the song so calm and yet free
The siren call of serenity
The sofest of the birds take flight
Dance beneath the Autumn twilight

Drift across the grains of Time
Dance beneath the Autumn twilight

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    EEEAARRRRGHGGGGHHHH!! How can you write something so beautiful with such a lack of effort? I know you don't have trouble, because it flows too well for that.

    I love the style (kyrielle sonnets are amazing) and the serene atmosphere you created is sooo peaceful!

    I can almost hear the sirens singing right now.

    BEAUTIFUL WORK!!
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Great poem. I actually felt like I was out in the middle of all these trees and could feel Autumn's Breeze. Amazing. Don't really like how the last stanza has 2 lines and the rest have 4, but still a great poem

    5/5
    Bryce

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, a totally awe-inspiring read
    to say the least. Like breathtaking visual
    inkling so beautifully written it is a great
    write no doubt. Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Awesome write! The poem was short and sweet but the flow was flawless.
    You are truly talented!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Very pretty Kim....
    Love Ann

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