by Kaylee Mar 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
While trying to find the rest of Road Of Shattered Glass, I came across this one that I was meaning to finish. If anybody likes this one, I will continue with it. Is long but don''t let that stop you from reading please. |
Wow, fantastic, this was very good. Please finish this. You are truley a good poet in my eyes. |
This is great. I was actually really interested and it was so easy imagining everything in my head. I would love to know what happens next, what's wrong with Elizabeth. Great job... my advice to you would be to continue with this script. So far, its awesome. |
by Angie
Definitely finish writing it....... it's wonderful so far and I would love to know what happens next......... you have got some damn good talent girl, keep on writing. |
by †Undone♥
This is very good. it sould be turned into a real script, a play. 5 |
by Laura Ash
5/5 you should keep writing it! I love that line "The darkness suffocates me. It haunts my dreams and destroys my waking hours" Do you mind if I used part of that in one of my poems? only change darkness to pain |