Wow.............PLEASE KEEP WRITING IT =] lol...It was very good kaylee, Once again, As i was reading that i could picture whats happening in my head! Your very good at writing!!!
Hope to see more of this story. I really wanna read it hehe
luv natalie x-x

P.S I would give it better then 5...But thats as high as i can go =[ So 5/5

I loved it, you are a fantastic writer. You are deffinitly one of my favorites!

Thank you for the comments on mine, at least someone can tell me what they really think of my poetry instead of just saying Oh, it's great!

Thank you, and once again, great poem!

5/5

Chelsey

5/5 you should keep writing it! I love that line "The darkness suffocates me. It haunts my dreams and destroys my waking hours" Do you mind if I used part of that in one of my poems? only change darkness to pain

This is very good. it sould be turned into a real script, a play. 5

Definitely finish writing it....... it's wonderful so far and I would love to know what happens next......... you have got some damn good talent girl, keep on writing.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

This is great. I was actually really interested and it was so easy imagining everything in my head. I would love to know what happens next, what's wrong with Elizabeth. Great job... my advice to you would be to continue with this script. So far, its awesome.

~ Tina

Wow, fantastic, this was very good. Please finish this. You are truley a good poet in my eyes.