Lame

by Emma   Mar 24, 2006


I wish it was all over
its just easier to leave
my dreams are gone
i have nothing left
except these scars
which have left behind
the crimson stain of life.
i am giving up
in the end there will be no pain
i will see only darkness
and finally feel relived
Feel no pain except
one swift cut from my blade
then i will watch
the only proof of my existence
escape form me
i wish to understand
why giving up is easier or
why life is so complicated
my unfilled dreams
hope like shattered mirrors
My past coming to kill me
Ending my life because i am
so lame...

**I was really depressed when i wrote this it isn't much of poem but more feeling...

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I agree with azlan...your emotions spilled across the page and touched my truly...to delve in such depression brought about some understanding...I hope your feeling much happier....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hiya,

    Another great poem, and another poem that I can understand.
    Espcially loved the line:
    "which have left behind
    the crimson stain of life."

    Cheers,
    Laterz,
    Shirlz.
    ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    *sigh* all these sad poems relate to some people i know SO MUCH
    They help me to understand what they go through
    Thank you
    'unfilled dreams' - great line
    Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Hey!! this is really good. i feel like this ALOT!! so i can sort relate!!
    great job!
    love jess XxXxXxX
    check out some of my stuff if you can! thanx

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