by StefQ Mar 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
He's standing at the end of a cliff |
by PINKY
Its very cute. i like it!!! but at the same time sad but in a good way. |
by Fallen~Tears
Awww i thought this was such a cute poem.. you painted a vivid picture.. great poem 5/5 |
by Sondos
This was very very sweet! I love poems that have a meaning and tell a story and you've done both of these here. Well Done |
by Kaitlyn
The message is really touching and sad. and the story you gave it was really good. the flow of it all was really good.this piece of writing grabbed my attention from even the sight of the name! amazing. |
by NannO
Hey... nice poem.. twisted indeed.. :D it was kinda inspirational.. and i lykd how u made it as if you could hear both their thoughts.. nice touch.. liked ur rhyme, too... good job with this one. |