Wow it read like a story but a story I could picture instead of well just words like I've been feeling form some poems here. The imagery was really great with the cliff in the start and the ending was well fantastic. Not rushed at all to me. I'd look over some simple errors like can should be could etc. But other than that I'll be glad to rate it what it deserves.

Awww sweet ending, love prevails. I thought the structure and rhyming of the stanza's was great - the flow was rhythmic throughout and really made the poem easy to read!! 5/5

WOW! Its so touching and it seems like a story and it sounds like i was standing rite their beside you in the moment and time.

Awww...I love it...it is a really cute poem...omg. i like it a lot...i really do...5/5

-Melissa-

Nice story/poem dude, had a happy ending most don't, twas a good change the rhyming was good and so was the flow so 3 outta 5 man... lol I'm just kidding 5/5

5/5 definetly! It was really good!

Aw wow, That is honestly really good! But..
"She drove as fast as she can
To safe his life
She would do anything
To become his wife."

Should be "Save" not "Safe"...Just thought id point that out =] Other then that, It was great!

luv natalie x-x

Awesome poetry - If only this sort of thing happened in real life =( Such a sad, and yet meaningful poem, it really brings out the old saying of good over evil, happiness over sad :)

Peace. [Sole]

Hey the start was really good but the ending got kinda shaky. Otherwise, You did an awesome Job and writing poetry is definitaly your thing. :)

I loved the message in this poem it was so sweet and i copuld picture it all happening, well done xx ALLY xx

What a beautiful love story, great message with beautiful penned! beautiful done!

That was awesome! you're an amazing writer.........keep writing.....you have a talent..........sorry it took me a while to look at them.....
xoxo
Cassie

WoW!!! till now this poem is one of the best poems i've ever seen. gr8888888 job i love it. keep it up. 5/5 of course :D

Hmm,this one's good,a story in a poem...it's full of emotion..good job!

He's life was a mess - is that meant to be his?

Sad from the onset, but filled with hope at the end, it seemed like a bit of a story to me, but a lovely story.
I loved the line: Her tears endlessly falling on the ground

Brilliant, keep writing =]

Interesting. Slightly prdictable, but its still good. Nice imagery in it. Great story line.

I liked this poem because of how it changeds scenes, first to him then to her and at the end it unites when the get together again, it was very different from other poems I have read, I enjoyed it very much. The only thing i could tell you is throughout reading your poem, it was intense and sort of had me at the edse of my seat because I wanted to know what was going to happen, but at the very end, the intense part faded when he turned around and they said they loved each other, it was just too there, like there was no emotion to the last part like there was thruoghout the rest of your poem, I think you could work on that part, but other than that, I really enjoyed reading your poems.

Oh man. i love it. the story was fantastical. amazing. and the back and forth between the girl and the guy was amazing and so was the imagery. :)

Wow - omg i was like on the edge of my seat, i could see it in my mind and to be able to do that to a reader is amazing - you have great talent, keep it going work on it and let it grow - 5/5 =)

Hey... nice poem.. twisted indeed.. :D it was kinda inspirational.. and i lykd how u made it as if you could hear both their thoughts.. nice touch.. liked ur rhyme, too... good job with this one.
keep it up
take care
NannO