The message is really touching and sad. and the story you gave it was really good. the flow of it all was really good.this piece of writing grabbed my attention from even the sight of the name! amazing.

Kat

This was very very sweet! I love poems that have a meaning and tell a story and you've done both of these here. Well Done

Sondos

Awww i thought this was such a cute poem.. you painted a vivid picture.. great poem 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Its very cute. i like it!!! but at the same time sad but in a good way.