That poem's Great.. It's Soo Well Written, It's A Mix Of Emotions.. Of How You Loved What Happend, But Also The Person Did It Was Evil And Nasty.. An amaizing Poem, Well Done.

Beautifully written... Loved it! Very forthcoming :)

Lvoe this poem..teh intensity is brilliant love it..i will try nad read all of them eventually and you can hold me to that ok?? kew so please keep writing i lvoe your work adn read as many of my poems as you can/desire thnxs....peace.

Lissa

Nice poem, wonderful job Melissa!!!

Such intriguing detail portrayed in a wonderful flowing verse. I love it...

"the way your passion spoke
with those lips of destruction
and then you kissed me, anyway."

Such a dynamic statement. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow what a great selection of words here, wonderful stanzas and so meaningful though said nothing.

this was very unqiue, great poem altogether

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow Melissa...this poem is amazing! Even though it doesn't really have a set rhyme scheme, it left me speechless. You can tell this write came from the heart ...

"You were knowingly heartless,
the way your passion spoke
with those lips of destruction
and then you kissed me, anyway."

...this stanza is really good...I love the way you put your thoughts into words...you're very talented! 5/5

If you could r/r/c my new poem called "Your Love" it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks

Your an amazing writer i feel your pain in this poem, but at the same time u feel happy but hate him! I Love this

Hey wow that was great. Good job..great how u expressed ur self (hi5) haha x0x nat x0x

Effin mazhan! xxxxxxxxxxx

This poem is amazing, I love it. Probabley one of the best pieces I've ever read.
5/5