Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.
i don,t know if you're really going through that..god I hope not...if so stay strong...
I don't know what to say about your poem other than amazing.
Great job!
-xxx-

Wow, I liked it... Although, In future poems it helps alot if you divide the poem into parts, for example:

She walked through the graveyard cold and dull
Her Black Broken Wings, a broken soul

Her feet hit the ground with heavy steps
Cold green eyes; raven hair always a mess
Blinded by the sorrow and pain
Her mother and father gone; she felt insane

Knowing sadly they'll never come back
She fell at their grave with a low smack
Not a tear slid from her forest green eyes
She wished the rest of the world would just die

Oh and by the way, Check out my poems if ya get a chance :)