That was a Very Very Very Sad Poem
And Excellently Written
It had no rhyme but thats good cause you put a lot emotion and detail in it
Great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

I can relate to this one all to well. I loved loved it. I got a little confused, but I figured it out towards the end. Your imagery was good, and the flow seemed a little rocky in some spots, but overall it was amazing.