Comments : The pain of this world

  • 18 years ago

    by CUT UP angel

    Thats very beautiful *wipes tear* great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Whoa I liked that alot and it must have been a god thing.. my papaw almost died last week.. and i am just scared now.. and now that helps and i ain't so scared nemore.. thanks! :] you write really well.

    Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautiful, touching... 5/5