Well done my friend. I don't know what else to say. besides I like it, and I hate you and your stupid talent. *sigh* I'll see you on the flip side Hun

This was a piece so subtly sad that i can't actually pinpoint what makes it melancholic. the structure is very nicely set up and that final verse was the perfect way to wrap up these cryptic ideas you've got going here... *mutters* 'two sides of a coin' *grumble* genius

This was strangly brilliant piece of writing. 5/5 from me. I think that I will check out some more of your poetry. xoxox Mercy.

Um....how can I put this? *WOW* all around,

OMG thats a really good poem! i like it alot!!!
~!ugly & unloved!~