Lets Play Pretend

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Mar 25, 2006


Lets play pretend and act like we are happy
Lets act like we want to live
lets smile when we want to cry
Lets cut when we cant take it any longer
Guess what
I got so good at pretend
that i dont know
what is fake and real any more.
I smle when the inside of me is dying. And everyone thinks I am fine.......

XXX rach

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this one, Although it seemed quite cliche to me I have read so many cutting poems now they don't see to have a twist. This is an older poem of yours and the emotion was great really interesting. Keep up the good work~mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelly

    I totally can relate to that poem - its really gd - can u comment back plz?
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Very good rach i can feel your pain so sad yet you keep trying , always Rach xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Like the other one, It was good. Your expressing your feelings very clearly, I just think Maby try and put a rhyming scheme into it. If you need any help just let me know.

    luv natalie x-x

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