Hey you did a great job on this poem. I'm not really afan of suicidal poems but this one can be an exception. (if she was suicial at the end) I don't know who you are Molly but I hope everything turns out ok in your life. Sometimes you can only be as happy as you want to be. Keep that in mind. In the meantime, keep writing poems! :)

Wow i luved it thanx for commenting on my poems!!!
i luv the ending of this one!!!!
well done 5/5 keep writing

Hey i love em, i really like this one too, thanks for the comment also =)
great job keep writing