Hey Nitin,
wow.. just great:)

Gr8......i m amazed yaar! u wer totally into dark poems and now u see urself where r u! u write awesome love poems......

keep writing such poems

luv,
Bharti

Wow...you're writing always stuns me!
I love "and i keep staring at those beautiful clouds
knowing they cry more than us, they have more pain"...

great job!

I know its nice to write more but all i know wat 2 say is...amazing

I loved the observation.... and the ending was incredible.. just too good... You're just such a talented writer... and i'm not going to say that this is the best one... let me just announce that all your poems are the best.. that way i won't have to say it for every single one... hehe...
5.5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Thats a really nice poem, i've enver seen someone use words like u do its different...good work xox me

You have just given a piece of your mind in this poem. I felt such a connection with this one, a heart to heart, a mind to mind connection. Mindblowing Nitin. Your ending was just breathtaking. It took the poem to a whole other level. Just perfect.

Love
Michelle

It's beautiful and especially the end. the way u closed ure poem was really smart and provoking.

love' from
wishes

Nice ending Nitin. are these nights meant for me to sleep? - certainly not when you have just fallen in love!

good luck to both of you

shobhana

Nice poem i like it, i gave it a 5. i like how the end is just BAM, it gets you in that 1 spot. good poem.

I like the ending..it was intense and the feeling is there.

"so tell me something love
with all these thoughts in my mind to keep
as i visualize all the beauties and pain from your eyes
do you think these nights are meant for me to sleep?"

nice!

OMFG. this is great!! yew did an awesome job!!

yew have a gift.

xoxo Susan

... That was simply amazing!

Great poem~

Hey this poem is excellent I love it!! Amazing job.
*wondering how lonely moon must be feeling too*
i love that!

Fantastic poem, what a beautiful poem, great job keep writing as im sure you will, take care sarah x

Again another great poem and this one is very different from the ones i have read so far, but is a good different. at first i kinda thought this was a poem about a dream and now i see it isn't a dream but a reality and i love it. 5/5

Nitin
The beauty of this poem made me cry. How wonderful your love is. How could someone not treasure this.

so tell me something love
with all these thoughts in my mind to keep
as i visualize all the beauties and pain from your eyes
do you think these nights are meant for me to sleep?

This is breath taking.
Love Cindy