Hmm..sad.. heartfelt, i liked it.
5/5

Amazing....so much depth and pain.......really Nitin ur words could b felt.....5/5

luv,
Bharti

Lol my poem was actually a song thats why it was long..But this poem Was Very Great and showed Excellent Detail and Description in your work
I like your rhymes very well said
Your Flow was on point
Amazing Job throughout
5/5
~TPOMH~

:( hope you feel beta soon.....~HUGS~..5/5....i think this is one amazing poem i loved the ending too. :)

luv
sonam

Well, what to say on this poem. These are my thoughts which turned out to be your words. Incredibly well written Nitin, I especially love the last two stanza. Awesome!!!

Love
Michelle

Well done, nicely written! I loved the ideas and how it all just flowed. Ok, I just loved it all :P Again, wonderful poem

Fantastic poem, well written, and def 5/5 take care sarah .

Fantastic piece hun i can't pick just one piece i like it all!

and thanks for the sweet comment xxx

I LOVE your poem. Itmade me cry. IT WAS AMAZING. WOW!!!! I am in awwwww. It is so great. Iam not kidding. I am speechless. Keep writing. you are a great writer. I have read some of your other poems also, they are great.
LOVE,
Lil' Momma

That was great. I don't normally give people 5/5 but, I felt like this poem deserved it. You're an amazing writer.

A sad poem often speaks more volumes than perhaps any other emotion does. this one says so much and more.

great writing, my friend

shobhana

Superb poem, such beautiful rhyme and so powerful too, great write 5/5

That was awesome. You're a great writer.

0oh huni this was t0uching and sad. very well written th0ugh.

I really cant say anything,.... its so wounderfull....

Very interesting! i like it!

It is amazing to read your poerty, i look forward to reading your concluding stanza because you have proven that it is always so powerful

thank you for the comment you left, i hope i get the love in the end too, but hey all i can do is hope

Nitin
This is such a sad poem. Very heartfelt.

walk with me my lady
for once just come along
see why my life is so shady
why with you i feel so alone

My wish for you yaar is that you never feel alone again.
Love Cindy