I don't pretend to care

love this poem as i do all the others
write more often!

don't hide away forever

^^^ She obviously pretends to care.
icarethoughicare

+ add little heart hereeeee.

WOW!!! Touchin..... I am goin to read more....5/5

Your poetry is quite beautiful. I love the way you set up each stanza, it flows very nicely. You should really consider publishing!

Very good awesome

Gurl from library

Catherine Stephens 762-8855

Heya hunny... That was BRILLIANT!! Truly... I liked it... I can relate to it in some weird way... I can't quite put my finger on it though. Great job... I look forward to reading more of ur poetry. xoxo

Hey sweetie.....you are amazing......haha just kidding.....well you are amazing but i wanted to be cool too n call you some cute little name........neways im trying to decide which is my fav........antidote for a poisonous son is definitely the best one........but this one n sleeping with a ghost are my favorite.....just because i can see you saying it n hear....hehe ....i already told you i cant explain it........but seriously.....you make it flow so easily....the first 2 lines are my favorite and the last.....i always told you, you should write.....n you did without me knowing......lol well i know now n im gonna make you keep writing more.....i know it'll make a lot of people on this thing happy.....yeah ill stop rambling now........YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD JEFFERS!!!!!

Aww. Jeffrey, B.e.a.you tiful poem! Expecially the part where is was like
"dazed by a persona I had been delicately weaving
I was superman to you, but looks are deceiving"

Excellent
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Really gd poem:D i like it:D 5/5!

VERY GOOD! wow... i would pick a fave line, but ever single one was absolutely wonderful.

Well. you are basically making me comment this one. I have already told you how I felt. It is better than the others. But the title is .. ew. Lol. Nice work. poo.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating:4.7/5

Um. this one was actually good. So I have nothing to say about it =)

Ohh adolph.

such loving words.

i am so jealous jeffrey, that people like adolph don't comment my poems every day.

tsssk. lucky.

Okay so i need to redeem myself from the last comment I left for this poem. I can't say much about this, and i think you know why. But seriously its written really well. Its probably one of your better flowing poems. The way you rhymed and the number of syllables you used for certain lines, makes it sound really nice. If I didn't know what it was about, I would really really really enjoy it. I do enjoy it. But only really enjoy it instead of reallyx3 enjoy it, because it makes me jealous. And this is the first time I noticed the "our skin bare" part.
pee ess- the whole funnel effect makes it sound like one of those ugly geese broke into your room right now cuz you are "making noises" if you know what I mean. i love it (well except the sounding like a goose part)