Last Night

by Hell   Mar 25, 2006


He hits me once, He hits me twice
He sent me to my room that night.

He hits me twice he hits me twice
I scream back good night!!!
But for me this was my last night.

I know its short but i find it quite amazing how short poems can be more powerful :) hope you liked it

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    It was really great please read my poems my pillow of tears and our little secret

  • 18 years ago

    by RikuStar

    And yes short poem are powerful...but it was good

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye i agree
    i rekocn shorter peoms get the msg across beta or there more powerful..i love it...love dia mwaz xoxo