Erm . . .right . . . Is that you 'Brainwave' :S I can't help but worry about you sometimes Jenny . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Umm yea
so poetic
UR CRAZY

Good poem, lol
xxxx

I like it but i didnt really get the last stanza it may just be me but i dont know im confused but i really did like your poem its great

LOL.......that was good and funny......sorry it took me a while to look at them.......keep writing hun...
xoxo
Cassie

Lol, great stuff, we all know what that's like. i like your poems, they're perceptive and quirky, very nice :)

Comparing a fit guy to ice cream...interesting....and yummy!
I liked the one liner noise words, you know which I mean, it split the stanzas up in a tuneful way.

Good job.

It's different and all, which doesn't have to be a bad thing. I mean, never read a love poem like this.

Lol, cute and funny poem, very cute. I enjoyed reading this poem, I like the "ooohh" and "aahh"'s, very good, great job

Thanks for the comments on mine!

Btw--this poem was excellently cute. =]

This one is so true
and funny.lol :)

Another great poem! It kind of made me laugh in a good way

Haha funny thumbs up

Lol, this poem is so funny it made me laugh out loud. I loved the extra sounding words you used between the stanzas, it made the poem great and a light-hearted read.