Aww hunny thats so beautiful and emotional.. i loved it so much.. u really did a great job in putting them together.. hunny u do know that she is lucky to have ya.. u are not feeling lame okay? your love for her i bet everyone envies.. so as always no matter how bad life seems to be, always stay strong cuz i know u can.
much love.

Awww, this is so sweet. every girl in the world wants her guy to feel this way. she is sooo lucky.

take care and be strong, ashes

I loved the way you spoke to your eyes as if they were a friend

Brilliant and sad
Keep writing =]

Great poem lovedit keep up the good work
~danielle~

Wow i know exactly how u feel this is so sad but your emotion was felt through the entire poem keep writing

laura