Nice poem 5/5+, glad i got to read it.

Wow this is really an xtremely beautifully written piece of art.

plz correct **demons**

all the best and take care

Kirstie you have an amazing talent...but reading your poetry makes me feel like you're in a shell. I don't see this when I'm around you. I don't see a hopeless romantic...or a girl filled with so much talent. I see a girl scared as hell of the world...maybe I'm COMPLETELY wrong and honestly I hope I am...you're amazing and you are just sooooo talented...let everyone see this side of you...stop being afraid to share this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is sad...but it's so creative...

So I've been thinking....we should do a collaboration. We could do it through email...It'll be FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love you and be safe!!!! SMILE!!!

Great poem, created a nice imagergy

Wow!!! i just have to stop and imagine after every sentence.. and i really really like this 2 lines;

This is how I deal with things, pretending there not real

and slowly I get better, at forgetting how it feels

Great poem!!!