Underneath Me

by myshiningstar14   Mar 25, 2006


I could start pretending
I didn't feel you, but
then who'd help me
be myself? I could
pretend that you
weren't there, but then
who'd be the one I'm
always thinking about?

I feel you, underneath
me. When I'm alone,
you're in my thoughts.
When I'm about to
do something I know
you wouldn't like, I
get this vibe. I feel
you babe, I feel you
underneath my skin.

Don't you see?
You're underneath me,
you're apart of me.

I could start pretending
I didn't hold you, but
then who'd keep me
warm and fill all those
memories? I could
pretend that I really
didn't love you, but
then who are those
feelings for, and why
are they so strong?

I feel you, underneath
me. When you're not
here, it's as if you are,
because your motion
and notion has seeped
into my skin, like lotion.

Don't you see?
You're underneath me,
and you're the one for
me.

I could start pretending
I didn't care, but then
what would I care about?
I could pretend that I
was just pretending, but
then how would I know
what was real?

I feel you, underneath
me.When I'm scared
and all alone, I know
that you love me,
and the words you
would say to me,
just come to me.

Don't you see?
You're underneath me,
and you're apart of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Your love for this guy is insatiable and would be unbelievable if i didnt feel the same way about Becky haha. love is really an amazing thing, that you need to have experienced to be able to even attempt to explain. you put it into words VERY well though. this people, is what it feels like to be in love...excellent poem

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Actually phil my man doesnt have a god like grip i was jsut sayign in my poem that evn though hes stil lfar awaythat all hes teaching me sticks with me nd i feel it beneath me....my man is no god to me theres only one jesus christ....

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Your man has a almost a god like grip over your concious and it convicts you to write about all the doubt and the fear that you could do but are unable to for fear of how he'll react to you... and how it would affect him.....
    you are really devoted to making sure that everystep of the way, you, are and always will be as reall as you can be to him, without letting any walls get in the way... you destroy those walls when they do form, and you get your strength from the undenyable truth of your love for him...... and that is honesty in it's purest form.....
    spectacular work and art my friend.... if there was a higher rating scale on this website i would give a hundred out of a hundred.... keep it up.....
    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by Xx_juss_cant_help_miiself_xX

    Goodness this was seriously deep!!! but i loved it once again!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Great job
    this poem was just very very enjoyable
    your getting better as you go
    Great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

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