Great job
this poem was just very very enjoyable
your getting better as you go
Great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

Goodness this was seriously deep!!! but i loved it once again!

Your man has a almost a god like grip over your concious and it convicts you to write about all the doubt and the fear that you could do but are unable to for fear of how he'll react to you... and how it would affect him.....
you are really devoted to making sure that everystep of the way, you, are and always will be as reall as you can be to him, without letting any walls get in the way... you destroy those walls when they do form, and you get your strength from the undenyable truth of your love for him...... and that is honesty in it's purest form.....
spectacular work and art my friend.... if there was a higher rating scale on this website i would give a hundred out of a hundred.... keep it up.....
phil

Actually phil my man doesnt have a god like grip i was jsut sayign in my poem that evn though hes stil lfar awaythat all hes teaching me sticks with me nd i feel it beneath me....my man is no god to me theres only one jesus christ....

lissa

Your love for this guy is insatiable and would be unbelievable if i didnt feel the same way about Becky haha. love is really an amazing thing, that you need to have experienced to be able to even attempt to explain. you put it into words VERY well though. this people, is what it feels like to be in love...excellent poem