OMG awesome poem!
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!! I loved it
you are very talented

♥
Rach

That was extremely sad!!! it was a great poem and nicely writen though! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

This was a good poem and i mean it

I really like this poem there is somtihing about that i love I dont know what it is but i love it

Great poem! amazing! wow!

I'm speechless i love this poem and the structure you wrote it in ...very deep and sincere

Great peice, the structure here worked well and the story was very clearly told

5/5

It was pretty good just seemed a little fragmented. but i liked it all the same xx ALLY xx

Ooh..this was a chiller....very depressing...but sad too. I love it...dont change it. Best stanza:

"moonlight going through the door
touching the blood on the floor"

Nice imagery here.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Great job! Very dark poem..Also I would like to comend you on the imagery wow.. it was awesome.. You have no complaints from me =) keep it up!

--emotionless.19*

Gah! Awesome-ness! It's really great. Different than I expected it to be, considering the title. But it turned out great all the same. ^_^

Amazing... just like all the other ones. You're talented. You seem like a very interesting person. Please, feel free to e-mail me. My private contact is available. Great job 5/5

~ Tina

I think it could have gone more in depth. It was good concept wise, but it could have been deeper. Why the revenge suicide. What good times could they have had?

I kinda feel like you just scratched the surface i was looking for you to go deeper into the poem.. and maybe a bit longer.. besides that it was real good .. keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job! you are very talented. keep it up!

This was good! It had a good flow, And the rhyming fitted in perfectly. Keep it up =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Its kind of cliche. but i really like this line:
moonlight going through the door
touching the blood on the floor

I think that the poem overall was good - however, the flow could be improved upon. The structure was great, the rhyming couplets worked really well to create a sad effect.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow you kept me soo interested in this and then cut it off way t short!!!! i was all caught up in it. great poem... thats a great technique for a writer. definately 5/5 because i loved it. -Jen-

This was a short, but sweet poem. Powerful, and sad. You chose your words well, and the rhymes were good.
Good stuff.