You must have a lot of love for yout boyfriend..Great Job i loved it
I havent written some good love poems in awhile there all on my other account.check em out if you can..
one is called
I still love you
By ~Torn Because OF you~
Thats me
Great job once again
5/5
~TPOMH~

This almost made me cry. keep on writin girl!

You compared to very extreme poler opposites in this... the idea of a heaven being manifested as physical touch is not a new concept but it is very accurate when used.... the idea of hell being manifested by the mental pain of missing a loved one goes much deeper then anything...esp. for me because i can really relate to that comparison. right now i'm in love with someone that lives two hours away from me, and it's breaking me not seeing her... sometimes i feel like prolonged times like these can really wear down on your soul.

all in all it's generally easy to relate to.... and when you can get someone to relate to a poem... you know you got something there....
intellegent and subtle are two words for this... excellent art my friend, i give it a five.
phil

Phil i sort of agree my main point was sayign that lvoe isnt all peachy keen and khuggsn akisses its missign nad crying and being separated...

Lissa

I agree with both of you. love is about the compassion, but also missing your loved one. yeah, i really like how you compare heaven and hell in this, two completely opposite things, to the comparison of love. that takes real poetic skill. I can relate to this so much...every moment away from her is another moment seemingly wasted...