A love, a dream

by Brooke Johnson   Mar 25, 2006


To the holder of my heart-

Imagine a world with just you and me.
where the wind blows so soft,
where laughter and joy are heard frequent and oft.

Picture a world where the work is like play,
and the sun smiles warmly on us everyday.

With love all around us, we are never alone.
And each day after school we talk on the phone.

where i know if I'm sad there are places to go.
A soft,warm shoulder to cry on as I let my pain show.

Am i not lucky to have you in my life?
everyday I wake up knowing that one day I will be your wife.

A love that is never ending, a pasion so strong.
With you by my side to love all life long.

I need you forever now, so please stay with me Sweetie.
Though this nightmare of change we will always be holding each other tightly.

Do you dream of this world too?
The life I picture in my head?
I know that you do my love, from all the sweet things you have said.

One day this world will be a reality, a world of just you and I. Just hold me tight in your heart till then.
Don't ever deny..
No matter where we go, where we are, you will always be.
The keeper of my heart and soul, and the only guy for me.

I love you mike,always and forever baby.dont ever forget my love xox-Brooke

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey Brooke,

    Nice start poem!, alother filled with numerous cliches, it.. it works, alother cliches are tired and over used by a mass of poets, You put it into the correct context and it flows wonderfully.

    where i know if I'm sad there are places to go.
    A soft,warm shoulder to cry on as I let my pain show.

    I like the latter line of this, the other doesn';t really make sense out of context lol! but hmm I like it. Keep it up

    Something to inprove: use ani-cliches like conter them..mold them you know? and dont for get to use puctuation and captials where needed =)

    I enjoyed this greatly

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke Johnson

    I hope you guys like it