I hope you guys like it

Hey Brooke,

Nice start poem!, alother filled with numerous cliches, it.. it works, alother cliches are tired and over used by a mass of poets, You put it into the correct context and it flows wonderfully.

where i know if I'm sad there are places to go.
A soft,warm shoulder to cry on as I let my pain show.

I like the latter line of this, the other doesn';t really make sense out of context lol! but hmm I like it. Keep it up

Something to inprove: use ani-cliches like conter them..mold them you know? and dont for get to use puctuation and captials where needed =)

I enjoyed this greatly