Now THIS is how you base a poem on a song!

You only used the line "something sexy about the rain" a couple times and brnached off in a whole different directon than Kenny did in his song.

Excellent job!

I especially like this part:
Spinning around beneath
Water makes me want to
Be innocent once again.

Very pure and sweet.

I love nature poems intertwined with love
=]
excellent

Beautiful! -swoons- This poem was really lovely. And the rain is definately really sexy! 5/5 for a good poet with good poetry!

Beautiful, lovely, awesome, imagainative, perfect in every way. I loved it
xxxx