The night it all went down

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Mar 25, 2006


A razor blade
A stained towel
Blood on the floor
and when they get there it is too late
all that is left
is blood stained notes on the floor to each of her friends
A young girl left dead.
Their emoitons in a tangle
and the room begins to swirl
She was mommys little Angel
And Daddys little girl

Rach

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  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    I hope you weren't thinking of seriously doing that..i have but in life times go wrong but they're bound to work out. hope everything is alright.
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Frenesiia

    Hey yal im not like them i honestly dont really no you but im here giving you support i loved this poem b/c its very meanful and i can relate so much but it seems as if u have sumone who care bout you' soo stay up keep going gurl u gotta go! thx buy **'MuchLove'**

    ..::..Frenesiia

  • 18 years ago

    by Frenesiia

    Hey yal im not like them i honestly dont really no you but im here giving you support i loved this poem b/c its very meanful and i can relate so much but it seems as if u have sumone who care bout you' soo stay up keep going gurl u gotta go! thx buy **'MuchLove'**

    ..::..Frenesiia

  • 18 years ago

    by JULIAx♥x

    OMG I LOVE YOU RACH
    YOU MEEN SO MUCH TO ME...IF YOU EVER HURT ME LIKE THIS I SWEAR I WILL BRING YOU BACK AND THEN KILL YOU AGAIN...IM NOT KIDDING...I LOVE YOU TO MUCH TO LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO YOU LIKE THAT ..SO WHEN SOMETHING IS WRONG OR YOU HAVE PROBLEMS THEN PLEASE TELL ME IM ALWAYS THERE WHEN YOU NEED A FRIEND....YOU JUST HAVE TO LOOK!! MUCH love ~~julia ♥