This is a very heartfelt write for such a dear friend Luke, beautifully written and touching! I hope all works out for her, just be there when she needs you.

You have come a long way with your writing Luke and I am very proud of you. Wonderful job!!

Hi Luke! This is Dhaval lol...(like you dont know :P) anyway first of all...i wanna thank u for commenting my poems it means so much...the fact that u actually took the time to read that three-part poem was flattering lolz..

and ur poem is awesome....
This girl that i love..
This girl that i adore..
The girl i cant sit back..
And watch suffer any more..

i totally love these lines....i hope it has made her feel happy.

Dhaval