Comments : Fall

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hello.
    This was awful short, yet you used great words and explained your self very clearly which I enjoyed.
    Try spell correctly to make it easyer to read, I only spotted one error, but thought I'd say for future poems.
    I really liked this, it was well written& could be expanded on :]
    Well done.x

  • 18 years ago

    by fallenfireangel

    You need to stop writing depressing sad poems and starting writing happy love poems hunny!

  • 18 years ago

    by keirstin

    I won't break ur heart...
    good poem thow
    smooches
    keirstin

  • 18 years ago

    by fallenfireangel

    Y is keirstein kissing u hun?

  • 18 years ago

    by Shayne

    Wow immortal lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Into Your Dreams

    I love it and i feel ya...