Doomed forever

by StefQ   Mar 25, 2006


Hidden emotions
Deep inside
Oppressed feelings
I try to hide

Rain in front of my eyes
Mist fulfilling my soul
Lost in this cold world
Trapped in a hole

Surrounded by darkness
Waiting for a sparkle light
To enlighten my path
To improve my sight

Lost in my thoughts
Those wander around
Devoured by tears breaking the silence
By hitting the ground

Fallen too deep
To crawl back
Emptiness pursues me
My world turned black

But I'll fight back
It's now or never
I won't be the one
That's doomed forever

Copiright©2006 by Stefan Jovanovic

~PLEASE ALL RATE AND COMMENT~

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  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    I loved the darkniss in it it was grate

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    That poem was really good... it really did flow a lot... well written... i sort of like poems with a twist at the end, but i really liked where you were going with this... good job keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Awesome poem with out a doubt ! I loved the way it flowd I like thiese type of poems alot for some reason! But you definetely got my 5/5 vote! Keep em coming! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Diana Cardero ©♥

    Touching i like reading these type of poems when im deppressed, it helps me let out all my feelings in tears. Grea t job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow loved this poem, it flowed so well :)

    well done

    Jacs
    xxx

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