Wow this poem is very good! its very descriptive. i loved it. great job! 5/5*

Wow the last line espically was very powerful, a great poem xx ALLY xx

Very good flow ... not to deep but simple is good in this case

Very good flow ... not to deep but simple is good in this case

Very good flow ... not to deep but simple is good in this case

I really liked it as it doesn't describe too much and we can find our own way to relate to it. This one line, though, I don't know what it is but it just doesn't feel right:

Devoured by tears breaking the silence

Amazing poetry - So sad, and yet such a great poem :) I loved each and every word of it!

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, This is great! You used such powerfull words. And it wasnt too long, Or too short. Which made it really easy to read. You also had a great flow to it. Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Wow this really hit hard, I can relate, beutiful dark imagery
"Devoured by tears breaking the silence"
Brill line

Beautiful. i love.

Wow loved this poem, it flowed so well :)

well done

Jacs
xxx

Touching i like reading these type of poems when im deppressed, it helps me let out all my feelings in tears. Grea t job 5/5

Awesome poem with out a doubt ! I loved the way it flowd I like thiese type of poems alot for some reason! But you definetely got my 5/5 vote! Keep em coming! ^_^

That poem was really good... it really did flow a lot... well written... i sort of like poems with a twist at the end, but i really liked where you were going with this... good job keep up the good work

I loved the darkniss in it it was grate