Wow, I think this Sonnet is even better than the other one, great! keep up the good work!!

Impressive :) I don't really like the sonnet style, but your poetry made quite an impression and next time, I will not be so dismissive of a sonnet :) Well written, good rhymes and consistent to the shakesperian sonnet style :)

Peace. [Sole]

Hey this is very nice. i love the form. sonnets are hard to write. nice job