If I Could, I Would

by myshiningstar14   Mar 26, 2006


If I could, I would kiss
you every night of
everyday; and never
would it fade. But now
I'm standing in the shade,
and that seems a bit
impossible right now, but
soon the sun will shine and
that day will come.

If I could, I would name
a star after you, and watch
it every day. But now that
seems a bit hard, for I do
not know how, but soon
the wisdom will brighten
and that day will come.

If I could, I would send
you a 100 roses everyday
and love you forever.
But that is a little hard, for
I do not have that kind of
money, but pretty soon
I will be able to send you
your one and only rose,
me, and that day will
come.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    I can tell that this comes straight from your heart...great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    Hey very good poem. i like how u write.

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    ^hmph.... dammi, why do they all look at th rhyming? hasnt anyone ever heard of poetic lisence? in case you didnt know that means that you can say all things in any way, and if you call it a poem, then it's a poem, and no matter how "unrhyming" it is, it's still considered a poem, cause the author said so.....
    look at the words people!!!!

    anyways.... now to the real comment...
    it's great to have love, and it's great to desire and dream what you want to do to express it.... love heals in many ways....
    it gives you courage to do the things you never thought you where capable of doing, and the strength to stand by those things when you do do them.
    in this poem you are anticapating the time when you are allowed full freedom to do anything and everything to your love.... and expressing your frustration for the things that you arent able to do for him, all the while praying that he knows that you still would do those things if you had the chance....
    you are a very caring counterpart and your man is very blessed to be loved by you.

    5/5 from me my friend... great potential and true honesty once agian....

    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by Xx_juss_cant_help_miiself_xX

    I loved this one. It dont rhyme very well but i lLOVE the meaning. recently me and my hunny broke up but he told me we would get bac together. trust me i would do all those things for him! very good! l-o-v-e-d it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Well this is my other account
    I love this poem
    Great job
    your writing some goood love poems
    keep up the work
    your doing great
    5/5
    ~TBOY~

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