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I love this poem
Great job
your writing some goood love poems
keep up the work
your doing great
5/5
~TBOY~

I loved this one. It dont rhyme very well but i lLOVE the meaning. recently me and my hunny broke up but he told me we would get bac together. trust me i would do all those things for him! very good! l-o-v-e-d it!

^hmph.... dammi, why do they all look at th rhyming? hasnt anyone ever heard of poetic lisence? in case you didnt know that means that you can say all things in any way, and if you call it a poem, then it's a poem, and no matter how "unrhyming" it is, it's still considered a poem, cause the author said so.....
look at the words people!!!!

anyways.... now to the real comment...
it's great to have love, and it's great to desire and dream what you want to do to express it.... love heals in many ways....
it gives you courage to do the things you never thought you where capable of doing, and the strength to stand by those things when you do do them.
in this poem you are anticapating the time when you are allowed full freedom to do anything and everything to your love.... and expressing your frustration for the things that you arent able to do for him, all the while praying that he knows that you still would do those things if you had the chance....
you are a very caring counterpart and your man is very blessed to be loved by you.

5/5 from me my friend... great potential and true honesty once agian....

phil

Hey very good poem. i like how u write.

I can tell that this comes straight from your heart...great poem