by LockedInEternity Mar 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Come close to me baby, |
I LOVE THIS POEM. It's so beautiful. It really is, and the ending is really really good. |
Aww.. this is soo sad.. but soo happy.. lol.. :D ... a very unexpected ending.. well i mean the second half i knew it was coming.. but you know what i mean.. the flow is flawless once again and the rhymes are great... the word choice is wonderful.. i like how you kept it simple but still the poem turned out really strong.. a very enjoyable read.. definitly worth more than a 5 |
by e LIZ a beth
WOW!! this poem was great. it was really long but i just couldnt stop reading!!! it was amazing. |
by Jackie Marie
Awww. It sounds like you wrote about The Notebook. It made me smile. =] |
by ashley rose
This part: |