He he he WOWOWOWOWOOWOW AMAZING

Ahh! It makes me want to cry! It reminds me so much of how I feel about this one guy. He likes me back, but we hardly ever talk anymore. =(

[When you're tender arms,
Hold me tight, Don't let go.
I melt in the moment,
I love it, You know.]

[And those wonderful nights,
We spent under the stars.
Where we lay 'till forever,
From the noise of the cars.]

We actually did those two stanzas like a week or 2 ago! =D We stayed out till 4 AM under the stars and I fell asleep on him. =) Great write. I loved it! The flow was very good, and the idea of the topic was well chosen. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem's so sweet, I loved the story. It was a little long but it kept my attention and I liked it entirely. The rhyming was good, and the descriptions too.

Good job!

Keep writing.

If you want to, you can comment on any of my poems.

XoXo
Gaby

WOW,,, donno what to say!! i loved the poem!!! that is true love,,, wow :D u really did a good job there...

MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS --
This poem definitely had a better flow and rhyming pattern. This, overall, is a wonderful poem, please keep this up! This love poem is much better than that other poem you wrote ;; I would definitely stick to love poems. =D Wonderful job, 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Awwwwh, that's a very sweet poem..But..JEEZE was that baby long. D:
Ohwell. *Works on more comments*

The trill when I see you,
[[Think you mean "thrill"]]
They're memories failing,
[[Was that suppose to be "their" ..?]]

Loved the ending. This was a beautiful poem. Told a really nice story, Keep it up and take care.

Natalie``

Wow this is really good. i like this a lot and again i can relate to this one too. amazing job. your a great poem. i'm gonna add you to my favorites and read more of your poems.

AAW! It's so sweet and sad at the same time! Only one thing I noticed:
you're tender arms = your tender arms

Other than that wow I love it. I like the poems you write that have a fixed structure so much! 5/5

AAW! It's so sweet and sad at the same time! Only one thing I noticed:
you're tender arms = your tender arms

Other than that wow I love it. I like the poems you write that have a fixed structure so much! 5/5

AAW! It's so sweet and sad at the same time! Only one thing I noticed:
you're tender arms = your tender arms

Other than that wow I love it. I like the poems you write that have a fixed structure so much! 5/5

AAW! It's so sweet and sad at the same time! Only one thing I noticed:
you're tender arms = your tender arms

Other than that wow I love it. I like the poems you write that have a fixed structure so much! 5/5

Oh no!!! sorry about that :S

Awww.... that is such a sweet poem, and yet sad... you did such a great job on this! I loved all of it. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and it held up well and you did a very good job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!
P.S. I've already r/r/c on the other two you wanted me to do, so I will do a couple others instead! Hope you don't mind!

Ahhh, a change of poetry. Hehe. Been reading all the dark and depressive sad ones. I liked this one. It was really long flowed well and it was seet. Great Job.

Ahhh, a change of poetry. Hehe. Been reading all the dark and depressive sad ones. I liked this one. It was really long flowed well and it was seet. Great Job.

Awww. That was very well written!

That was so sweet.

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW that was soooo sweet, absoloutly beautiful. i wish i could give more than a 5 for you but unfortunatly i cant :(
Well done,, amazing poem,
Love ~She Died Screaming

Wow this was so long but yet amazing I love the rhytm of this poem and flow and rhyme also Great piece

XD

Geneross