by Chelsea Mar 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Rain drop tears in my eyes, |
by Daniel J
The title and idea of the poem - raindrop tears - is certainly interesting, and is what enticed me to read the poem. The idea of "raindrop tears" is certainly a good one, and certainly has much potential; a little "meat" needs to be added to your poem, in my opinion. |