This is great, beautiful imagery a lovely story well told and i espically like the last line it summed it up well great job
xx ALLY xx

Hey Ben. look, i'm sorry, i wrote you a really good and deatailed comment but then i got signed out by the site so, i'm sorry. i'll just have to wrap this up. it wsa a good piece. the imagery was great. i felt it also had loads of emotion and depth. anyway, i got to go, dinner's getting cold, and again i'm sorry that i couldn't leave a better commet, i did originally..i promise. well, keep it up Benny boy

Brad

Seems you have quite a few fans!!:) Very nice... very descriptive and deep.

Ben, this poem is amazing...I LOVE IT...You are amazing....and gorgeous... I love your poems....You are a very good writer babe
dont ever stop writing!
love ya!
Julie
xoxox

Heya its meee! lol i really like this poem, well done! xlindsayx

I really like it.. its good and refreshing and its gud 2 know that ur going gud...

*deeply

Very beautiful :) it mad me smile, i know what ur going through