Lol this is an awsome poem! its true and cute! i give 10.10 its awsome!!
Keep onwriting awsome poems!,
ill expect some soon:D:D jk

That is an awesome poem!!

Real good and it can relate to some people i know [ahem..] Yeha, Its an instant 5.5, short but meaningful :)
Take Care :)

I like this it's short but conveys a gd message 5/5 x

Haha, thats funny/cute. As mentioned above its short, but great! You got talent.. I cant write really short poems = ( They turn out liek crap, lol.

Nice..and so very true. 5/5

Diana

Reminds me of when I was younger, running away from everthing. You forgot to add that shit follows you, haha. good poem.

This is really good. There are a lot of people out there who are like that. There should be more people out there who are brave, like you. People who bear their souls to others and accept what comes along with it. You're a wonderful writer =)