by Lenny
Wow its depressing and sad and also the tiniest bit humurous though I know its not intentional and I dont mean it as an insult. Theres alot of pain in there and I agree with the poem though not the title. Being judged by weight is ridiculous, absolutely ridiculous. People who make fun of other people are really just jealous. And its just giving into them if you feel bad over it. Just one thing Id change for the last line maybe you could replace 'Just because of my state' with perhaps a sentence that includes the word 'ate.' But thats just my opinion, I liked it. Alot or expression of emotion in there, great job. |