It was a very stright forward poem..liek this is how it is so deal with it sort of poem. And i love how u put in the thing about becky being the best descion of your life..its great how in almsot every poem some way some how you mention her or a characteristic...i love it thats a true man...i try and do the same...if u read my love poems u'll see that too. keep it up buddy.

ur friend
lissa