Wow, I like it! Though a bit lovey-dovey and sappy for my taste :)
Seriously, it is beautifully written with such heartbreaking sadness.
I like the opening lines, it sets an eerie mood, that compliments the rest of the poem.
Well done...
Love ya~Holly

Tim, what a beautiful sad penned, well expressive emotion...

As deep as the soul goes. Straight from the heart absolutely beautiful.

Love lis

Very tender and touching.

another excellent write